Hello this is what we have been doing at the start of writing each day. Our teacher give us a picture and we have to explain what we would hear taste and smell.These are some of the ones I have done. I found these tasks were really fun. Have you ever tried doing this? Bye.
Friday, April 17, 2020
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Hi sienna,these really are wonderful!And no I have never done this but maybe i should give it a go?
ReplyDeleteHi Annabelle thanks for the comment. you should give it a go its really fun:)
DeleteFantastic writing Sienna, I really like how descriptive you've been with your three sentences and including the pictures definitely gives your reader something to connect with. Maybe next time you might consider adding a little more detail to your sentences to change from a compound to a complex? Remember to keep using your Think 6 for posting :)
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs A thanks for the comment. Sorry its a bit late but I will remember that for Next time.
DeleteHi Sienna. I like your creative sentences using the senses. The airplane crash picture and writing gave me the chills. It'd be great to see longer sentences as Mrs A said and maybe you could include some similes, eg. as cold as....?
ReplyDeleteHi Becks thanks for the comment. I will make sure to add that in. Sorry its a bit late bye:)
DeleteHi Sienna its Kadie. Good job on your work, but maybe on the hot air ballon starter you could chnage the font as I found it a little hard to read. But overall good job!!
ReplyDeleteHi Katie thanks for the comment. I will keep that in mind for next time:)
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